by BalinTheDwarf » Mon Mar 13, 2023 12:20 am
Are his parents, or anyone else at all, present? Yes Have they abandoned him? No Location relevant? Yes Nick's age relevant? His relative age might help; see below Is this going to have a happy or sad ending? Sad, but not with any major consequences Is it present day, past, future [list of dates or whatever] Present day
Is his crying due to pain? The first time, this (the cold feet) and something else Sorrow? The second time, pain (the cold feet), this, and something else Frustration? Fatigue? Not these
Is he traveling? For part of the story For example, going for a walk with his parents? Not "going for a walk," but they are walking for part of the story And is just tired? No If someone picked him up and carried him, or put him in a stroller, would the problem be ameliorated? No
Is his precise age relevant? Not precise, but: If so, is he infant/toddler/preschool/elementary/middle/high schooler? He's either elementary or middle school aged. More likely elementary
Is the weather relevant? No What he's wearing? Yes, svv of "wearing"
Is anyone else relevantly crying? Hungry? Cold-footed? No to these Otherwise miserable? Maybe, I wouldn't say "miserable" Is anyone trying to lessen his misery? No, but... Increase his misery? No